Mistress of Trethowan

High on a Cornish clifftop, the towering stone building of Trethowan, holds a dark secret. Someone who should be there is missing. Melissa Pendleton spent all her childhood holidays, at her grandparent’s house, in North Cornwall, but on the eve of the new Millennium, she discovers the secret her grandmother has kept hidden for more than five decades. Who is Anne-Marie? Why did she go away? When did she leave? Where did she go? Is she even still alive? Clutching at the frailest of straws, Melissa’s search takes her from Cornwall to the south of France, and from there across the Mediterranean Sea, where she experiences terror in the hills of Corsica and hostility, where she least expects it. When the trail goes cold, it seems her search must come to nothing.


Following the success of ‘Heartbreak Baby’ my first novel, published in September 2024, I decided to complete one I started about thirty years ago. Whilst on holiday in Tintagel with our young family, I began to plan a novel based on an old house on a clifftop in Cornwall. Then when we were camping in Provence, I thought this would be a great place to set a novel, but I hadn’t really got very far with either idea. Then some years later when Alan and I were in Corsica and driving up into the hills, suddenly a complete story came into my mind, which would start on the north coast of Cornwall and take our heroine through the south of France and on to Corsica. Over dinner and a bottle of wine in a Corsican village, I told Alan the whole story from start to finish. Now all I had to do was write it. Even so, with four children, teaching full time, and Alan’s career as a professional artist blossoming with a new London Gallery, there never seemed much time to write and although I did a bit here and there, I never really saw it as anything more than an enjoyable hobby, with no urgency to finish or publish it..

Now, in 2025, with one novel out there I decided to take up Mistress of Trethowan, and completely re-write it, developing new themes and storylines. It is now finished and is with a professional proof reader, before going off to a publisher. I’m hoping it will be out by the middle of 2026 – so watch this space!

The Journey of “Heartbreak Baby”

From acceptance by Pegasus Publishers to its Publication Day

Everything is new to me. I feel like a child setting out on an exciting adventure.

21st April  2023           This is the day I submitted my manuscript to Pegasus Publishing and was told it could be up to twelve weeks before I heard back from them.

6th June 2023                 A most exciting day.  Six weeks after submitting my novel I opened my emails, to find a letter from the Pegasus Commissioning Editor to say that Heartbreak Baby had been accepted for publication and offering me a contract

10th June 2023                I have now signed the contract and “Heartbreak Baby” will be on the bookstalls sometime next year!

9th October 2023          Today I received the proofed and tracked manuscript for me to review. I will need to read the entire novel to approve or reject their suggestions and make my own adjustments to the text.

26th October 2023       I have been giving a lot of thought to the ending of my novel and wished it had a different conclusion.  I wrote to my editor, to see if it was too late to change it and she replied that it wasn’t.  So I am going to rewrite the final chapter and I think my readers will be delighted as it now ends of a note of hopeful possibilities!

3rd November 2023    Just finished the re-write and have sent it off to my editor.  It was more difficult than I thought it would be, as I found I had to tweak several parts of the novel early on, so that the continuity of the storyline fitted in with the new ending. Hope they like it as I think it is a far better end to the novel, and will be a more satisfying conclusion for my readers.

16th November 2023 Exciting day. I had just finished the complete review of my manuscript and was about to email it to my editor, when she sent me the ideas their design team had for the cover and there is one I really love.  I want a slight adjustment, but as soon as I approve it with the publishers I will post it here

So……  Watch this space 

20th November 2023 

It’s Here! The cover design for Heartbreak Baby

Now I must try to be patient and wait for the publication date, which will be sometime in the New Year 2024.

So……  Watch this space

12th September 2024

Wow, it’s been a long time to watch a space – but at last it’s here – the Publication Date of  “HEARTBREAK BABY” By Patricia Crossley-Hayes is 26th September 2024.

It is already available to order from your local independent bookshop or online from Waterstones, WH Smith, or Amazon.

17th October 2024 

Heartbreak Baby is now out in bookshops and available to buy online.  I have had some very positive responses from family and friends who have read it and I hope it will appeal to all who see it on the bookstalls.

So Heartbreak Baby has at last arrived and we wish it well on its continuing journey.

 

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